WWF: Initial Presentation Boards

Questions Sam and I came up with regarding our idea and presentation boards:

• Do you think the idea is engaging enough?
• Does it fit the target audience?
• Which colours do you think would be best suited for the project?
• Does it need anything else to show our idea?
• Are the presentation boards too plain?
• Any other suggestions?

Peer Feedback:

• 2 minutes might be too long. Motion graph is very hard to keep someone engaged for 2 minutes with pure factual information. It might be better looking at the minute mark.
• Boards are nicely and professionally laid out, but there isn't much to show about your actual idea - storyboards etc.
• It definitely reaches the target audience
• Single line to signify interconnectivity is an effective solution, but is it too simple for 2 mins?
• Could have more colours and textures in area but always return to the line.
• Like the info graphic idea, 2 minutes might be a bit ambitious but will work nicely. Liking the colour schemes. Could relate to the audience by using technology in animation.
• Initial idea has potential, but fluidity might require a bit too much time for a 2 min piece.
• Love the idea - the idea of the world unravelling into the human figure.
• Cool idea!
• I like the simplicity! works well.
• The text on presentation board could be reduced to make room for more concepts/images.
• What information is going to be presented in your animation?
• Any concept work or idea? - isn't really clear on what it will really be like.
• Colours:
• 3rd colour chart, 2nd brown texture.
• Blues, greens, brown shades - Earth brown colours in the background
• I think you should use greens and browns but you might need blue is you're doing a globe.
• I like the 3rd column of colours and 2nd background.
• Boards are good - bright colours and graphicy pictures could work for the audience.

What we took from this:

• 2 mins might be too long - make it 1 min instead
• Need some concept art/storyboards to enable others to understand and visualise idea better.
• Colours: Green, brown, blue.
• Mistake on 'Why' column (which I've amended before uploading)