Peer feedback:
Strengths:
- Communicates a clear message
- use of minimal shapes and very simple nuance lines to convey some emotion - simplicity
- Crisp design
- the appearance of collaged paper - aesthetic
Weaknesses:
- Design in each panels look too similar - not enough variation within sequence
- Typography doesn't match the concept
- colour scheme could be improved
I am pleased with how my final design came out as I really like the simplicity of it and how easy it is to read the message. However, if I was to do this again:
- I think I would look more into the typography - maybe try to incorporate it into the image to make it fit better.
- experiment more with colours
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