Feedback from peers, strengths:
- Article is clear in final illustrations, a clear sense of the concept through re-occuring imagery and symbols within the final outcomes.
- Range of thumbnail experimentation into the outcomes and exploration of ideas in different compositions and media.
- Experimentation of media
- Clear, polished and bold outcomes, thoughtful composition. Good contrast between blocks of colour and detail.
Suggestions:
- the vastness of the article could be emphasised more
- Some initial ideas are stronger than outcomes and could have been explored more in different media before settling with one idea.
- Could have experimented more with different colour combination, media and tools, even if its just playing around with photoshop.
- Don't be afraid to use hand generated pieces as a final outcome- the collage and bleach looks more enticing than the digital finals which look quite flat and clinical (a common side affect in photoshop.
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