Feedback: Over all the feedback we got were all very positive! We realised that we made a typo in the 7th frame with 'carbon', which we have corrected! People have also said that we should present our image bigger, or have more boards to show this off as 'they are too good to be that small'. We've also realised that it would probably be useful to add a context page showing where you would see the animation. Other than that people seem to really like what we have so far! below are a couple of comments from the peer review today:
- Very professional vibes
- definitely 'winner' potential - such a well adapted and appropriate tone of voice.
- Nice designs, lovely textures, clean and simple - effective.
- We like the combination of typography and book style illustrations.
- Spelt carbon wrong on the seventh image. Otherwise amazing. Perfect tone of voice for the brief - Beautiful as always.
- More design boards to show off this idea because its absolutely lovely.
- Illustrations are so good - can they be presented bigger? Need to give your work and amount of detail justice!
- Nice style, clear to understand
- Really nice style. Simple and gets the point across.
- Beautiful textures. Do you need a statement 1st board?
- Playful. Nice designs - very fitting for brief.
- This made me feel a feeling
- Amazing style and flows really well
- Nice consistent style!
- I've seen you making this and it looks great so far!
- Very professional. Would make a lovely book.
- I love it - looks so professional and consistent
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