- Clear quotes linked to author.
- The use of the light and dark gives the work an eerie feeling and reflects the atmosphere/dark themes of the story.
- Thumbnails give a clear sense of the story, also based on text in book.
Comment on the visual concept of the proposal (are the decisions about aesthetic, media, colour, appropriate to the intended tone of voice, mood and /or concept)
Appropriate research into artists work and have collected enough references to give idea into the intended tone of voice and mood. The light and shadow/dynamic lighting create a sense of fear (e.g darkness - the unknown), and again reflects the atmosphere of the story. The imagery/drawings are already vivid and speak for itself. They would work without text, but some compositions might benefit from a little bit of text - so make a decision about this, try it out and see.
Comment on the clarity with which the audience and or context has informed decisions relating to format, scale, media and content.
- Appropriate to identified audience
- Key motifs/scenes would allow existing Coraline fans to instantly recognise/relate to the work.
- The proposed aesthetic would also appeal to new audiences - own style and not a rip-off of the artwork of the screen adaptation.
Comment on the extent to which the planning of time and resources has been effectively considered in order to enable the production of the proposed work in the time available. (are the action plans and project management sheets specific with regards to workload, deadlines and timescales)
- Deadlines considered
- Blog is up to date
- Got a clear sense of direction regarding what to do next - do it.
What do they need to do?
- Decide on which thumbnails to develop
- finalise artwork
- Decide whether to use text/type or not
- Experiment with colours/textures etc.
- Do test pieces of screen prints
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