Statement of Intent Peer Feedback 2

Comment on the clarity of the rationale
Strengths:

• Have thought critically and know what you want and what to improve this year.

Comment on the clarity and appropriateness of the Themes/Subjects

Strengths:

• Have stated a lot of themes/subject

Suggestions:

• Try to put in more details e.g atmosphere - then what kind of atmosphere? scary? happy?

Comment on the appropriateness of Products and Methods of Distribution

Strengths:

• Know exactly what products that you want to do which is good.

Suggestions:

• Put more detail - what kind of product that you want to try out?

Comment on the appropriateness of Skills/Media/ and formats identified

Strengths:

• Stated quite a big amount of bullet points and stated reasons which made the reader know your reasons.

Suggestions:

• Do you think you'll have enough time to improve all this in less than a year?

General Comment:

Action plan - Add deadlines so it won't confuse you.

Briefs:

Brief1

Clarity/appropriateness of the brief:

Very detailed brief 

Considerations/Suggestions:

Decide which story/play that you want to illustrate.

Brief2

Clarity/appropriateness of the brief:

Good brief, hopefully you'll get paid

Considerations/Suggestions:

make sure you investigate about liver transplant before you start illustrating.

Brief3

Clarity/appropriateness of the brief:

An amazing brief that could add your name in Indonesia

Considerations/Suggestions:

Make sure that your tone of voice is suitable with Adam's adventure products. Maybe use more duller colours than what you usually use.

Brief4

Clarity/appropriateness of the brief:

Very detailed. I like how you have already decided themes for this brief

Considerations/Suggestions:

Are you going to add typography? Think about colour scheme? be more specific on your themes.

Brief5

Considerations/Suggestions:

Keep looking at YCN so you won't miss the deadline.

Likewise, I think I need to make it more clear on what I will physically produce and what I will be proposing. I also talked to Fred for a bit after this peer review session and asked him some questions about other briefs that I have not stated in my SOI or blog because I was just informed about them recently. I'd like to discuss my briefs a bit more with Fred next week in the individual tutorials and hopefully I will come out of it with a more detailed and more absolute plan on what it is my briefs are! because at the moment I keep thinking about other briefs back and forth because I have so much that I want to do and it is really distracting me!

What I need to do:
make deadlines for stages of each briefs
summarise brief before explaining why you’ve chosen it in rationale
sort bibliography
link your reasonings for things in rationale, etc
prioritise briefs
be more specific
look at proposals vs actual product
think about time scale snd what is achievable